Sunday, March 16, 2014

W2. My first edits. Describe why you made them.

* English
The first one that I edited is "administrative districts in Cheongju city"
Cheongju city is my hometown. And the administrative districts will be changed in July first. So, if you search the Cheongju city in Wiki, you can find this edit.
Second is about "Related place with Gangnam"
there is just writen Gangnam station and Gangman-gu office station. so i put more information about subway station. Gangnam station is seoul subway line 2 and Gangnam-gu office station is seoul subway line 7 and Bundayg line.
Third is Tteokbokki. Tteokbokki is selled in street vendors and pojangmacha. So, I add one more place "Franchise snack bar"that sell Tteokbokki.
I translated about Hodugwaj which is korean walnut cookie to English.
"Jecheon is located in north of Chungcheongbuk-do near Wonju city and Yeongwol city which is located in Gangwon-do"- edit more detailed information about Jecheon(location)
*Korean
I search "College Scholastic Ability Test". In the part of "how to run", some sentences could be an argument in my opinion. "If students are late in test, police or firefighter can bring them to place where test are done." So I deleted this part.
The article of New york city subway is well translated but, one sentence was awkward. I changed the sentence more natural.
Hanyang university Ansan campus has 7 strategic departments. But in Wiki, there are only 4 departments. so I upgraded information refer to website of our school.
the key word is "가평군" and you can find "축제" which means Festival. I knew the annual Jarasum singsing Winter Festival in January
the festival named Rainbow music&camping Festival will be held in Nami island. I put this information and web link in "남이섬" newly.

1 comment:

  1. That's a nice description! Thanks for showing them in class, too!

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